Looking for some opinions on this

[odordude]

Hi Guys. I am new to the industry and I am looking for some feedback on my sales page. I plan to send traffic to this page through youtube and would appreciate some feedback as to if it is a good page in your opinion or what could be done to improve it

What are your thoughts please?

http://www.dogurinesmell.com/

many thanks

[Dan Nickerson]

Change to the Blue Skinny background option using these images and settings

http://www.socratestheme.com/forum/showthread.php?t=940

Center your order button
Fix some left alignment issues
Offer a guarantee.
Tell them the price
Offer a bonus like how to train your dog where to pee.

[odordude]

Cheers dan. Great information and i will action. Just to double check in the thread you mention in your reply it talks about uploading the 3 files. Where do i access those please cheers

[odordude]

I have changed the background color Ok so i guess i don't need the 3 files??

[Dan Nickerson]

There are 3 files in my post from the thread above.. it's hard to see the 3rd file in my attachments but it's there.

I would use the skinny template though..

[alpine1]

Change to the Blue Skinny background option using these images and settings

http://www.socratestheme.com/forum/showthread.php?t=940

Center your order button
Fix some left alignment issues
Offer a guarantee.
Tell them the price
Offer a bonus like how to train your dog where to pee.

Hey Dan: I wrote you on a related topic... ie a zen cart question- but just noticed that one could bypass the zen cart -relative newbie confusion- and just make a post(or page) and put the order now button in the post the send them over to paypal. For the website I'm referring to, I only have a handful or products to offer and later will bundle services together to a more expansive way. Is this a cool way or is this too cheap of a way to take online orders??

[Dan Nickerson]

Just use Paypal. It's the most efficient way.

[paulw]

What a fantastic domain name. As above, seems like its a mixture between a blog and sales page at the moment which might be a bit confusing for visitors, but I am by no means an expert.
Good luck

[Kacy]

Wish you much success. I'm a newbie, too, and my confusion is that you stated "it has to do with the techniques also and I share these with you FREE." Then the next paragraph is asking for $9.95 - Cheap, yet not free.
Kacy